LEFT-The Alley I walked
One night, I was walking back home from a supermarket near my house because my mom told me to buy some cooking ingredients such as butter, eggs, etc. When I was walking past an alley, I heard someone groaning and screaming for help. I couldn’t let those screams go on, so I decided to check on it. When I arrived at where the scream came from, I could see 2 men beating a teenager. Since I didn’t know what had happened, I assumed that the men were beating him for money. Because I can’t stand seeing a helpless teenager getting beaten, I yelled at the men. Then they turned towards me. I hadn’t noticed that there was nothing I could use as a weapon so; I took the eggs I had bought earlier and threw those at them like they were grenades. It worked, and the beaten teenager tried to take his revenge by beating the guys until they were unconscious. The teenager thanked me and he offered me to buy the eggs that I had used to help him and I accepted it. Man, that was one unforgettable experience…
By: Bintoro, Upper 3
Warning! The story above is completely fictional. You’re welcome to try the events in the story at home but the risk is yours to take. You’ve been officially warned!
2 comments:
Good work! I particularly like the warning. I'll give you more detailed comments in class. By the way, the answer to the riddle is...the guy had the hiccups.
I'm still waiting for Ivan's assignment. I hope to see it soon.
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